Here is a running list of comments on my poetry. My poetry books can be found at the following links:
A Hollywood Fantasy
- "'A Hollywood fantasy,
How I wish it were true,
Instead I'm stuck in reality,
Not knowing what to do.’
LOVE this part. This one rocks. Like this poem. Wonderful, amazing and beautiful."
A Hypnotic State
- “'Uncertain if I'm dreaming,
Or am wide awake,
If she's real or a figment of my imagination,
As I remain in a hypnotic state.’
Love this part. This is wonderful and beautiful."
Alien
- “'Alien are my surroundings,
Alien are the faces,
Constant tests and experiments,
Constant adaptations and changes.’
These words are amazing. I love this."
A Rat in a Cage
- “'I hit the bar repeatedly,
Get fed bits and pieces at a time,
Until I get sore and tired,
And don't have any more stamina left inside’
Love this part. This is wonderful."
Beat
- "I love the ambiguity of this piece. To me, the beginning refers to rebirth and the end speaks of heartbreak."
- “This is such a powerful write, I felt intensity with this. So nicely done.”
- “lovely. i thought this was nicely penned.”
- “Very grimacing, man, but a fine picture of the circle of life.”
- “a great methorical drum beat of life…”
The Big Gamble
- "Casino's in Vegas, casino love in the balance, what a combination and metaphor on love. Nicely expressed emotions."
Break-up Operation (B.O.)
- "Ah, this one tugs on the heart. I like this - made me ponder a bit on love."
Fantasyland
- "I like this write. So nicely written."”
- “It’s pretty amusing.”
INsecurity Level Orange
- "I sense a sadness in this, then in the end I feel hope come rushing in. Quite the wonderful read here."
Just a Friend
- "Ah, this is such a wonderful, sentimental piece. I really like this write. It's so warm and filled with compassion, nicely done."
Long-Distance
- "Damn... That's beautiful work right there. Simple, but so accurate... F*ck, that hits home. As per usual, you're amazing with words!!!"
“No Pain”
- "WOW, very powerful emotioins in this, sorry for the hurt, but your emotions flowed so nicely down the page."
“Oblivious to the Obvious”
- "Oh my. There is such truth in this. Others should read this write. There is a lot in this to realize. Some people will never see. Nice write."
“One”
- "I feel that this is the truth. I like this write so much. I love it when the truth is told. So amazingly done!"
“One Voice”
- “I read all the three poems you posted but especially liked ‘One Voice’. You have beautifully portrayed the helplessness and agony of the person behind the voice and the apathy of the world as a flowing poetry. It actually compels the reader to sit back and retrospect. I applaud your talent!”
“Puppets”
- "What a wonderful image this calls forth. 'Our heads and arms dangling'. Freedom from our strings and the people who pull them, such a powerful message. I really enjoyed your poem."
“The Shield”
- “'Protection from ignorance and lies,
Protection from dishonesty and bitterness,
Protection from insults and pain,
Protection from the breaking of my heart’
I know part of this feeling here. This is so amazing. I like these writes I'm reading."
"Blood Before Principle"
- "That was both beautiful and heartbreaking."
"BeLIEve"
- "That’s poignant and very well said."
Multiple Poems (“Illiterate in Love,” “The Re-Awakening,” and “Everyone Except Her”)
- "I enjoyed reading your poems. Some of them are really touching and you can relate to them."
Penetrating the Heart of Life: Ambiguous in Thought, Ambivalent in Feeling (2011/Paperback and Kindle)
Seasons Come, People Grow: A Poetic Journey (2006/Paperback)
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